100 w/c – Dylan B

One fabulous sunny day. My friends and I were on my play station and all of a sudden the game crashed!!! Although the game crashed I was still going to have fun . Suddenly I decided I will going to pull a prank . I was going to go outside and make noises .and then put something down the drainpipe . It’s time to pull the prank. I put the snake down the drainpipe.” What is that”Matthew. “Ahhhhhh” and it came down the drainpipe. It was a funny moment. We were all laughing so hard. Matthew got so angry it made it funnier.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c – Dylan B”

  1. I think I’d be like Matthew too if somebody played a prank on me with a snake! I’m absolutely terrified of them. Poor Matthew….. he must’ve been really angry – especially when everyone laughed at him.

  2. Dylan, the prank would’ve gotten me too! A snake – yikes! A suggestion – you could leave out “It’s time to pull the prank.” sentence and just keep the action rolling. That would free up a few of your 100 words to use for further detail or action. I enjoyed reading your short story.

    Mrs. Peterson
    Team 100wc
    Texas, USA

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