100 w/c – Darragh

It was 20 years ago, the streets were quiet. I stepped into the old house.T here was an old switch, I flicked it and lights came on there was an orange glow. I walked into a room and it had a old bath in it. Suddenly I heard a noise from the kitchen, I walked with caution. I didn’t see anything just dust that danced away. Then something came out of the wall, it looked like a spirit. I ran clumsily knocking down a vase. A spirit came out dressed like a fighter, it had an axe and threw it at the door. I ran out catching my breath when suddenly…!

One thought on “100 w/c – Darragh”

  1. Hi, Darragh!
    I like how you left the reader on a cliffhanger. Cool idea, I wrote about a wrestling match. Did you know that a lot of people think witches are real? One thing I think you could work on is giving more details.

    Happy Writing,
    Amalia in Illinois

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