100 w/c Craig

Ding! ding! ding! David and Andrew and I walked out of school. Happily we walked home we saw an abandoned house. “are you wimps coming? ” said Andrew. It is a tall house and a giant tree is stuck on top of the roof.Slowly we opened the door it creaked, Daivd flicked the light switch, the lights came on. There were no cobwebs surprisingly. I saw a shadow and heard a door close. Daivd saw the door close. I wonder what was behind the door. I think Andrew was a little scared from his face. ”Open it”said Andrew. I opened it.

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  1. Hi Craig,
    Why would you open the door!? No good can come of it! Andrew sounds like he deserved a bit of a fright after calling his friends wimps, I wonder what was behind the door?
    I really liked the way you used onomatopoeia to give the full effect of the going home bell from school. It added a lovely effect to the introductory line.
    Keep up the great work!
    Ciara (Team 100)

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