100 w/c – Craig

There are 10 lego people alive. They live underground, where they’re are safe from humans. Michael woke up “adventure day in the upper world” shouted the king. Michael hates humans. But he loves the life and plants. Normally the humans are all ready at the jungle. Michael walked the journey with the king and the others. It is not a hard journey because of the trees, they protected them. Whethey made camp, finally, they could put down the heavy bags. They began sleeping. When everyone was asleep, Michael went with a torch and climbed a chopped down tree, he saw many ladybirds.

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  1. Hi Craig,
    What an intriguing piece you wrote! Why were the Lego people in need of protection from the Humans? Were the humans evil? Why are there only 10 left? Did the Humans hunt them? What adventure are they embarking on?
    Well done for writing a piece that offers more questions than answers, it can be tricky to do that as we sometimes feel the need to have the beginning, middle and end. I do think though, that sometimes the really good pieces are the ones that leave you wanting to read more- which is exactly what your’s does!
    Well done!
    Ciara (Team 100)

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