100 w/c – Cian

In a primary school called St. Johns in England there was the worst teacher ever! His name was Mr. Bath. All Mr. Bath did was work and nobody knew why he was so grumpy! Then one day Mr. Bath was not in school because he was sick so the class had a substitute teacher. The teachers name was Mr. Orange. As Mr. Orange came into the class he clumsily slipped on a banana skin. All the children started to laugh and so did he. After he got up he pranced and danced around and suddenly started doing karate moves like he was a professional fighter. He walked over to his desk and shouted, “HI KIDS MY NAME IS MR. ORANGE!”.

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  1. Hi Cian! I really enjoyed your piece it was so creative.One thing I liked about your piece is that you used words to describe what they did and there personalities.Did you know that there’s a actual character in videos called Mr.Orange.One thing you could improve on is probably Just your ending because you ended on him just saying something there wasn’t anything after that but nice job over all.
    Happy writing,
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