100 w/c by Zach

‘Today on RTE we will be talking about a statue that has appeared outside of a local primary school in Dublin.’

‘Teachers from this primary school saw this statue at eight o’clock in the morning. The statue is 25 metres tall with its head looking up. We have Tom at the statue, Tom over to you.”

‘Thank you Ciara, today the students at this primary school are intrigued by this statue. The misfortune of this statue is that it is made out of limestone and is not able to be taken down as there are too many cracks. The identity of the possible artists are limitless.’

4 thoughts on “100 w/c by Zach”

  1. Hello I loved you’re story, I liked the creativeness and emotion. Maybe net time you can check for run on sentences. You’re story was very good and I hope to hear from you again.

  2. Hi Zach I liked your story because of the way you used the prompt.
    I wonder how the statue got there?

    It reminded me of my story.

    Bye Dylan

    Mrs Boyces Class

  3. Hi Zack
    I like your story because it’s realistic and funny .
    I wonder why the statue was there

    From Joe
    Mrs Boyce’s 5th class

  4. Hi Zach,
    I liked your story because you did a news report.
    I wonder where the statue came from.
    It reminded me of when I went to Greece and saw a massive statue as well.
    Bye – Benny, Mrs Boyce’s Class

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