100 w/c by Zach

One day in America at N.A.S.A. they were planing a mission to Venus. Two people already volunteered for the mission. The rocket would take off in two weeks time. The engineers called it the ‘Vindcator’. The volunteer’s names were Tom and Sara, they had been training for two months.

It was the day of the launch. Tom said to Sara “Are you nervous?” Sarah said “of course I am!”. The count down started “10…9…8…7…6…5…4…3…2…1”, but then it just wold not take off. The rocket mission was futile. All of a sudden the cockpit blew up with a big “BANG!”

4 thoughts on “100 w/c by Zach”

  1. Well done Zach. This is a great story. Your writing has really improved and you have used some of the vocabluary words which is fantastic.
    Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hello Zach.
    I really like the intensity and excitement getting ready for the take off.
    I wonder why it did not take off. It reminds me of a film I watched

    Bye from Adam Mrs Boyce 5th class.

  3. It is a really cool story and I really like the name “Vindcator” but what happened after the cockpit blew up.

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