100 w/c by Tadhg

King Ronald was a very young man. He lived in a big white castle in Ireland, where there was a huge fields full of cows, sheep and horses. One bright Autumn morning, when the leaves were covering the floor, the cows were mooing. King Ronald went down to the fields. He suddenly fell. He started rolling down a small hill. It was King Bob! King Bob was quite a crafty old man always playing tricks on Ronald. But this time Ronald got very angry he went to his castle and started to fire cannons at him. Bob did the same and it ended up in death for both.

4 thoughts on “100 w/c by Tadhg”

  1. Tadhg,
    How sad for the idyllic piece to take such a vengeful, destructive turn! I hope to hear some lighter tales from you soon. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100 and Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. Hi Tadhg,
    You did a good job, molding the prompts into the story line. You would want to consider looking for grammar modifications next time around. Wish the story ended happier!

    Keep on writing, Tadhg.

  3. Hello Tadhg, well that ending was a surprise. It does show, though, how what seems like a small joke or even a small nasty trick can go horribly wrong. By using the challenge word of “rolling” instead of a stronger word like hurtling or pulsating down the hill, lured me, as the reader into a false sense of security and then, “wham”, you hit me with the cannons and death. Well done.

    1. Hi Tadhg,
      I like your story because Bob and Ronald are funny characters
      The ending surprised me when King bob and Ronald were firing cannons and they both died.
      I wonder if Ronald was only joking with those tricks all along.
      By for now Dylan Mrs Boyce’s class

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