100 w/c by Tadhg

Me, John and Michael were on a tour of Áras an Uachtaráin. We were brought by all the important rooms in the building. There was a room that looked vacant but had a sign that read ‘Forbidden Entry’. I could not see through the small glass window but I had to see what was inside. When I touched the door handle an alarm went off and the army ran down the hall to stop it. It was a bit overwhelming. Then the Gardaí arrived to see what was going on. They took us for questioning, but the car wouldn’t work so the mechanic came to repair it.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Tadhg”

  1. Hey tadhg i really like your story but i just had to ask what happens at the end cause you kinda left it on a cliff hanger.

  2. Hello Tadhg, well that would have been scary. I can just imagine your hand going out slowly and then the noise of the alarm going off. I think this story gives you an opportunity to write further. It would be great to explore what went on whilst you were being questioned. I was a bit confused by the car at the end of your story.

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