100 w/c by Tadhg

Every Day Mr. Violin walked to work. On the border of the city and the desert. On this day there were road works on the main street so he had to make a diversion. Which meant he had to walk through the desert where there were loads of prickly cacti. By the time he got there some men were stealing his green apples. Then he called the police. He started to rage when they bruised his apples. When the police came he told them that they had no permission to take his apples. They were then later found guilty of robbery and kidnapping.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Tadhg”

  1. I really love your story! It is very detailed and I can imagine the scene happening in real life. I would’ve liked to read more about Mr. Violin. I like green apples more than red apples so, which apples do you like best?

  2. This is a brilliant story, it is really vivid and descriptive. I would love to read more.

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