100 w/c by Tadhg

It was a cold foggy day and Martin and Jack were going to go boating at the lake. Martin had packed mushroom soup for lunch. When they arrived at the lake they made some rules for their race. They decided that it was from the bottom of the lake to the top. It’s time to go racing shouted Jack. Jack was in the lead for most of the race but all of a sudden he dropped his oar. This was technically breaking rule 1 of 7 using your hand to get you to the end. Jack have Martin a wistful smile and save with his wrinkled hand. Jack wasn’t happy.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Tadhg”

  1. Hello Tadhg. I really like your story. It’s descriptive and creative! You also write/type the characters’ emotions in the story, which gives me better understanding to them. It reminds me of my 100WC.

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