100 w/c by Tadhg

It was a typical old day for Mr. Tiger he got up to go to work at the Hunt The Deer Factory. He slammed the number 29 gate. Ms. Leopard saved him good bye. Mr. Tiger was listening to the radio in his GTR when the weather came on. The lady said there was a massive storm due to come that evening. After work, he phoned Ms. Leopard and told her to go to the shop and get loads of food for the family. When he got home it was too late Ms. Leopard was still at the shop and the gate was gone…

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Tadhg”

  1. Tadhg,
    The development of your story is good. I was impressed by the ending. To improve, I would make sure you check your spelling and add all appropriate punctuation. This story shows a good level of creativity.

    Keep up the good work,
    Daisy 🙂
    100 Word Challenge

  2. Hi Tadhg! I like your story. How did you come up with this idea for the gate picture? My story was completely different!

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