100 w/c by Tadhg

It was a warm spring morning when Jack and Ella walked their dog down the main street of Dogtown. Their dog Leo had started to get tired about one hour into the walk. They had gone by the beach and loads of other landmarks in the town. Ella had to run into Dunnes to get some Brennan’s bread and some Avonmore milk. When she went in a cat appeared outside the shop. Jack was holding Leo when then cat bit Leo’s tongue. Then it let out a pitiful howl (the cat) as Jack shouted at him. Leo’s tongue was bleeding but he was ok.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Tadhg”

  1. Once my dog did this.
    I like how you described the spring Morning
    You did a great job with your story

  2. Kia ora Tadhg. I also like how you’ve described the events of the morning – going for a walk, getting the bread and milk. It sets the scene really well … for the disastrous bite! Well done Tadhg, keep up the wonderful writing!

Comments are closed.