100 w/c by Rorí


The crazy scientist shouted. I’ve created sun glasses for giants. “Nathan! Come here try these on”. Stomp! Stomp! Stomp!

“Ok! Papa”!

“They’re beautiful papa”!

“I know they are”.

“Can I wear them out papa”.

“Well no not really because it’s raining cats and dogs”.

“Wehhhhhhh” Nathan started crying.

Ok Ok shouted the scientist.

Out of nowhere tweety shouted “i thought i saw a pudgy cat i i”.

“Ok! settle down tweety” said the scientist.

“Oh there nice, fluffy pink glasses said Tweety”.

“I know”. “Papa made them”.

“ok time for bed now”. Said the scientist.

One thought on “100 w/c by Rorí”

  1. Hello Rori,
    A crazy scientist, sun glasses for a giant, a bird who sounded like Tweetie Pie from cartoons… You show a good level of creativity in your story.
    Your use of speech added an extra look into your characters as we shared their conversation.
    I only noticed a few small punctuation errors in an entry I enjoyed reading. Well done.
    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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