100 w/c by Rorí

“Get out of here!” Shouted the man as we ran away from Area51. We robbed an alien and called it Joe. It was so dark out we couldn’t see then all of a sudden a ,big flash of light, then darkness. I here was a mothership In front of us we were scared. All of a sudden carrots appeared so we ate all to get better eyesight. When we finished them we could see everything. When we got back to my house we went in and ate dinner he ate everything. So we were all starving and eventually happy died.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Rorí”

  1. Rorí,
    I think the narrator and the others in the story were clever to use the carrots to gain improved eyesight—how resourceful!
    I wonder why you chose to end your piece as you did? With all those carrots, I’d think the characters would be thriving, not dead.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., BLOG BUDDY CLASS TEACHER, Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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