100 w/c by Rorí

I was so happy at this point my life was revolving around this thing. It was pink concrete. It was layed down on my driveway today. But one thing I don’t like about it is that we have to jump over it so we don’t ruin it. As I was walking on my phone to my house I accidently stepped in the concrete and ruined it. So I panicked and told my mam and dad that I was going to the shop because I was hungry. Little did they know I was actually going to get more pink concrete.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Rorí”

  1. hi rori im Evan i really like how you related your story and relatabilty I love the humour too so good story bye!

  2. Hello Rorí!
    I am a bit confused if your entry is a response to this week’s iron photograph as I see the iron as being grey and not pinkish…However, I did smile about your character telling their parents they were going to the shop to get something to eat as a cover to get some more pink concrete to fix it. As a kid (and I’m much older now!) that was something I did do, too!
    Keep writing!
    Francine (Team 100)
    Twin Cities, Minnesota USA

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