100 w/c by Oliwia

Cassidy got a pretty yellow bicycle for her 9th birthday. Next day she called her friend Alana so they can go biking together. Alana had an old wretched bike and when she saw Cassidy’s she became even more desperate for a new one but she knew her parents would never buy her one, so she greedily snatched Cassidy’s Bike and rode off. Cassidy was left speechless but then yelled ,’ALANA I’M WARNINGYOU IF YOU DON’T GIVE ME BACK MY BIKE ILL TELL YOUR PARENT AND YOU’LL BE GROUNDED FOREVER’ ,but Alana kept going and Cassidy started crying .

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Oliwia”

  1. It was so good. I am going to be honest with you the part when it was all capital they need to have spaces in between them . Do you like your story because I do .

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