100 w/c by Nathan

It was Christmas eve so Jack and Jill did some shopping for some late presents.

” What shop are we going to ?” ask Jill

“We are going to Bill’s and Bill’s” said Jack.

”Ok off we go!”

Jack and Jill were at the shop. Jill shouted,” Where is he?”

Jack was at the other side of the shop. He bamboozled himself and got lost. He did not know where to go. I will look for her he said in his head . Soon after Jack gave up and all of a suddenly he felt really ill. Jack collapsed on the floor in pain crying “help me!”.

” Jack!” Jill shouted, “are you alright?”.