100 w/c by Mia

‘Elise!’ Called Mom. Elise roused from her comfortable soft bed. ‘What?’ she called. ‘Come on we are going to the American Revolution Museum’ . ‘Finally,’ said Elise. She had been looking forward to this for weeks. For breakfast, she had muesli and orange juice. On the subway ride there she listened to the Hamilton musical soundtrack. Around an hour later she arrived. She saw a statue of Thomas Jefferson and James Madison. She went in and she saw her idol Lin Manuel Miranda, giving a speech. She was so happy she fainted. When she woke up she was back on the subway. It was the perfect day.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c by Mia”

  1. Hi Mia
    I liked your story because of the trip you had it sounded exciting.

    It reminds me when I went to London and visited the science museum and the natural history museum in one day.


    from Aidan Mrs Boyce’s class

  2. Hi Mia,
    Great story!
    I like the adjectives you used in the story.
    I wonder why Elise had such a lucky day.
    It reminds me of when I went on holidays to Greece.
    Bye from Benny, Mrs Boyce 5th Class

  3. Hello.
    Your excitement at learning history made me smile. I think I shall put visiting the American Revolution Museum on my list of things to do someday.
    Thanks for sharing.

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