100 w/c by Matthew

Once upon a time it was a nice sunny day, it was the 13th of September 2013. The day of our road trip. I woke up and I got dressed, went out the front door. I ran to my friend’s house and I knocked on the door and they came out and we started our road trip. They live right beside the woods so we went in there. We saw a really shiny box and we went over to it. My friends said ‘don’t go,’  but I went to the box “but I had to see what was inside”.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Matthew”

  1. I love how you told every bit of the story in a quick way. And the cliffhanger of not telling us what was in the box left me at the edge of my seat. Keep writing!
    ~Amina A

  2. I love road trips. Next time don’t describe as much like i got up i got dressed and went to the frond door. It is un need information. Love the cliff hanger. What was in the box

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