100 w/c by Luke

This morning I went to school and there was a new kid and I was asked to show him around and be his friend so I did it. After school I met my friends and the new guy asked could he come. He hasn’t told us his name. We went to the abandoned house and threw Marmite at it. It was lots of fun. Then we gave a jar to the new kid. “No” he said “I like marmite.” Then he went home and the next day we were told that a boy called John said we threw Marmite at a house. The principal told us.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Luke”

  1. Hi Luke,
    I enjoyed reading your story. Well done.
    Throwing marmite at a house? …I think I’m on the side of the new boy here!
    Keep up the good work.

    Enjoy your Easter holidays,
    Mrs Boyce, Co Cork
    Team 100wc

  2. You are supposed to put (I did) in the end of the first sentence. In sentence two you are supposed to put could I come with “on each side of what he is saying.
    It was good

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