100 w/c by Jessica M

… Empty. What a surprise! As John was walking through Miss O’ Neill’s house he realised every single bit of furniture was gone and so was Miss O’Neill. John started to panic and rang 999. Officer Pete picked up the phone and asked what was wrong. When he heard Pete’s story he asked who he was, John told the Garda his name. Pete said” John are you Miss O’ Neill’s window cleaner? “, ” yes I am” said John. “Miss O’ Neill moved house did she not tell you about it” said Pete. “The moving truck was out there yesterday.” “Phew” said John, “panic over.”

4 thoughts on “100 w/c by Jessica M”

  1. Great story Jessica. I can see that you really thought this through. But next time make sure to watch punctuation. overall great job.

  2. Great story Jessica. I can see that you really thought this through. But next time make sure to watch punctuation. great job Jessica.

Leave a Reply

Your e-mail address will not be published. Required fields are marked *