100 w/c by Jasmin

It was my birthday 21st of July,

Mam said she didn’t know what to get me, so I said “ Maybe a plant or something like that” she replied with “THATS A GREAT IDEA” she seemed awfully excited I didn’t know why…

She came home with a big HUGE prickly green cactus! I named him violin Because it reminded me of violet.

A week later…… I went out to check on him and he was bruised!!!!! My heart dropped. WHO HURT MR.VIOLIN I yelled. I am going to investigate who has hurt my beautiful cactus! Come back again to help me find out who it was!

One thought on “100 w/c by Jasmin”

  1. Jasmin,
    We are wondering if your future 100 wc pieces will be sequels to the violin tale of bruises and mystery.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G. and class, Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA

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