100 w/c by Jasmin

The princess was in her castle doing her usual crafty art work. A few minutes later Mr. White came in to check on her, on his way out he mentioned lockdown or something the princess didn’t hear what he said,

Until she turned on her tv to watch some news and saw the news reporter wearing a mask and what looked to be a space suit! But it wasn’t a space suit or just any old mask it was about the Corona virus. The princess looked out her window to see the leaves rolling by on the wonderful white snow wishing she could be out there.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c by Jasmin”

  1. Jasmin,
    How sad for the princess to feel so ‘locked in’ during the virus! Luckily she was crafty and had lots to entertain herself. She also seemed lucky to be able to see details on TV, and also to have a view of nature out her window. We call those ‘silver linings’ here.
    Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., Team 100 and Buddy Class Teacher, GES at FMS, Guilderland, NY, USA

  2. I love that last sentence, Jasmin. The descriptions in it are really scenic, especially the detail about the leaves “rolling”. I also like how it tells us the mood of the story by showing us how the princess is feeling. This is a well-written and inspired piece. Keep writing!

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