100 w/c By Jasmin

I was home alone on October 31st….

My mother was gone to the shop to get Halloween cookies.

It was around 8:30pm or possibly later, I started watching a scary Halloween movie to get in the spirit!

I began hearing strange noises but I had just thought it was that silly mind of mine!

I heard a large van pull up outside and I live up a back road not in an estate or neighbourhood……

I peeked out the blinds to see a man walking towards the door, with a package. He left it there, mam always said NEVER to open the door

…but I had to look inside…

2 thoughts on “100 w/c By Jasmin”

  1. Jasmin,
    You have set up quite a nerve-wracking moment in time. The narrator seems to be letting curiosity get the better of them. That trait seems to be even stronger than their fears. Keep writing.
    Mrs. G., BUDDY CLASS TEACHER and Team 100, Guilderland, NY, USA
    PS: Please ask your teacher to remind your classmates to include their names within the text of comments to our class because I can only publish comments that include our buddy’s names directly INSIDE the comments. THANK YOU!

  2. Hi , JAsmin I thought all your writers pieces were really good but I really loved this one. I loved that it was about halloween.

    – Natalia ortiz

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