100 w/c by Eden

We were right in the middle of Summer, experiencing a heat wave. My brother and I had spent most of the Summer in the forest, since it was one of the only shaded areas in the town and it was close by.

We decided to do a walk by the river that day. We were walking on a path but I was confused since we should have already been there. Suddenly I noticed water on the ground and then realised it WAS the river. “I have never seen the river bed so dry before!” I told my brother. We were astonished but we decided to continue our walk for now.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c by Eden”

  1. Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Eden. You provided clear detail for your readers to visualise your text. It is always a joy to read text that is punctuated accurately. I am nominating your writing for this week’s special showcase. 😊

  2. Awesome story! I loved the plot of this. My teacher to,d me that we were going to a story similar like this.

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