We were right in the middle of Summer, experiencing a heat wave. My brother and I had spent most of the Summer in the forest, since it was one of the only shaded areas in the town and it was close by.
We decided to do a walk by the river that day. We were walking on a path but I was confused since we should have already been there. Suddenly I noticed water on the ground and then realised it WAS the river. “I have never seen the river bed so dry before!” I told my brother. We were astonished but we decided to continue our walk for now.
Congratulations on your response to this week’s challenge Eden. You provided clear detail for your readers to visualise your text. It is always a joy to read text that is punctuated accurately. I am nominating your writing for this week’s special showcase. 😊
Hi I wrote about this too. You have a great story. What’s the brother’s name?
Awesome story! I loved the plot of this. My teacher to,d me that we were going to a story similar like this.