100 w/c by Callum

Jack and I were knocking for Fredo. Jack asked me “Do you hear that?” I didn’t hear anything. Jack wanted to go in and so did I. We went in and heard the noise coming from the garden. We saw Fredo dancing with his family. They were wearing fluffy clothes and bottoms. They asked if we wanted to join them Jack said yes, I said no, but Jack persuaded me to do it. We were walking to the garden before I tripped on Fredo’s old red scooter. I fell onto the concrete in their back garden and thankfully I was ok we happily danced.

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  1. Ok I really got scared when he wasn’t at the door.But i like the use of the required words.Was it cold out or warm if warm then why would they have fluffy coats on?

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