100 w/c by Brian

One sunny morning I decided to get up and knock for my friends. I got my bike out of my shed and went to knock for Aaron. He said he’d be ready in two minutes. When he was ready we left and got everyone else. We were cycling on the road, and Aaron fell off his bike and it fell into a ditch. He had to go into the ditch and get it. After that we all just went home and relaxed for a while. When it was 4 o’clock I called Aaron and asked him did he want to go for a cycle but his bike was broke.

2 thoughts on “100 w/c by Brian”

  1. Brian

    I really liked your word choice like cycling. One thing you could work on is giving the reader more information on what was happening when the bike fell in the ditch. Good job!

    -Aiden

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