100 w/c by Ben

Last Halloween my friend and I went to a party. On the way there we had to go through a dark alley. Then we turned the corner and BOOM!!! Fireworks everywhere it was the best thing I have ever seen. Suddenly we saw a big group of people set off black cats so I tried one out. After a while when it just wouldn’t take off, I kicked it and BOOM!!! I was in the hospital for four months. After I got out I couldn’t even walk because it was so numb and I never went near a black cat again.

4 thoughts on “100 w/c by Ben”

  1. Well done on your story Ben. I like that it is about Halloween safety which is very important. Keep up the great work.
    Ms Brennock

  2. I loved your descriptive details. Try to use a variety of onomatopoeias not the same one. I loved the story I personally do not like cats. I would like to hear more stories of yours-Lana

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