100 w/c by Ben

Once upon a time there was an old yellow house in a forest and it had no windows. After school my friend and I would check the house out but there was a man who warned us to stay away as this is private property. Suddenly there was a big explosion so I grabbed my bicycle and pedalled as fast as I could. The next day I was so desperate to try sneak in to the house. That night we snuck into the house and there was tons of money so I greedily stole half of it and was rich for the rest of my life.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c by Ben”

  1. Hello I loved your story I love stories like that.Maybe you could say if the man came back for you if you got hurt. Where did you get this awesome idea? Keep writing stories like this I really liked it.

  2. Hi I liked your story it was creepy and i like it. Maybe next time your can say what you did with the money

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