100 w/c by Aaron

I do not understand why my dad keeps on saying do not go in the basement. But I had to see what was inside. I was so disappointed that I could not see what was down there. Was it just a monstrosity or was he repairing a surprise for mam? I had to find out what it was. Other than that dad is so careless around the house. One night everyone was asleep so I ran down to the basement. Maybe there was an endangered species down there. But then I saw what it was, dad had kidnapped someone. My dad is such a miscreant.

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  1. Hello Aaron,

    This is like a “curiosity killed the cat” story where the protagonist (main character in the story) can’t resist the temptation to explore the basement dad had forbidden. Someone kidnapped… that was an unexpected twist. Well done.

    Ross Mannell (Team 100WC)
    Teacher (retired), N.S.W., Australia

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