100 w/c by Aaron

One day me and my family were going on holidays. After a while, we made it to the airport. My sister and I were very excited. Finally, after hours of waiting we were boarding the plane. We saw a plane when it wouldn’t take off, they said,” the plane would not take off”. A few hours later we made it to Spain we were happy to get proper sleep. It was dinner time we were all very excited to eat. I got spaghetti bolognese my sister got pizza, my mam got a burger, and my dad got lasagna. It was delicious after that we went to the beach to relax.

3 thoughts on “100 w/c by Aaron”

  1. That sounds like a lovely holiday! Well done on your story this week.
    Don’t forget to try to include some describing words in your story so that your readers can visualise it in their heads.
    Ms Brennock

  2. Hi Aaron
    I liked this story because there was great grammar
    It reminds me of when I am in the airport waiting
    I wonder why the plane wouldn’t take off
    Keep Writing
    From Warren
    Mrs Boyce’s 5th class

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