100 w/c Ben

Last week me and my family went to Belfast. When we got there we took a taxi to a five star hotel. It was called the Raspberry Hotel. The first thing we did was go for a three course meal at the restaurant. After that we went to a magician. At the magician’s house he said he could make my sister disappear, and I was shocked. The magician said some weird words and BOOM! my sister disappeared and I said to my mam ‘but how could she just disappear?’ After we went home and I was still shocked about it.

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  1. Hello Ben, Wow! I thought your sister would return but she didn’t. That was a surprise. I like the detail you have provided in your story and how you start calmly and then with a “Boom” the sister is gone. I think you need to write another story so we know what happens to the sister.

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