100 w/c Amy

One day I brought my dog on a walk. And then we came across a hill and my dog was not on his lead. We went down the hill but my dog ran down it and then he fell down it. And I ran down the hill to check on him as it let out a pitiful howl. He looked hurt so I brang him to the vet. The vet said he sprained his leg so he had to just sit at home for a week. After a week I brought him back to the vet. The vet said he was fine again then I brought him on a walk.

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  1. Hi Amy! This was a nice piece of writing. I thought it was wise that the narrator brought their dog to the vet when it seemed like he was in pain! I also like how you included a follow-up visit to the vet, which makes the scenario more realistic. I think a lot of stories often forget that. Hopefully they are more careful on their next walk. Great work, and keep writing!

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