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One day mother nature gave the power to all Durian fruit to live. The Durian fruit had a great idea to rule the world and end hunger and end plastic. But there was one little problem; mankind. The fruit told mankind their plan. Mankind hated their plan and that started a war. All of the Durian fruit went back to their tree and made up a plan. They got in secretly and shot everything they saw that moved and they won the war. A few Durian fruits died but there was no mankind alive so they picked up all the plastic and grew lots of trees and flowers.
Once upon a time there was a Dragon called Jimmy. Once when Jimmy was flying through the woods a spiky plant got stuck onto him. He did not realize. So when he sat down for a rest the plant opened and in the plant there was a baby Dragon!
Jimmy came up with a name for the baby, and the name was Joe . Joe said ‘hi,’ in a adult voice and Jimmy decided to teach Joe how to do things.
Years and years past and Joe left the family and Jimmy said ”I am never going to that woods again.”
Long, long ago there was once a tall tree. It was 12000 years old, noone really knew how it still stayed up. The tree was so tall it was over the clouds! There was a gigantic ladder all the way up, and a little branch to the side. There was a family of six birds, living on the branch. Later when all the birds were sleeping, the mom of the birds went to get food. She climbed up took a nut, she slipped off the tree and was in the air. The worse part was she couldn’t fly, aventually she landed on a big and fluffy cloud. She really liked the cloud, it even tasted like candy floss! She hopped from cloud to cloud to tell her family to come and live on the clouds. After that they were the happiest family ever.
Once upon a time there were animals called spiderlings they lived in very spiky – looking cherries. Always they would stay their loved ones in their spiky habitats. But one spider wasn’t a spiderling it was a loving – looking spider. Her cheeks were pink as a heart and her scarf was puffed like a cuddly pillow heart. Always she would be sad she wanted to live with her speacial someone in her own spike habitat. One day she decided to make her own wings since spiderlings, had wings and she really wanted wings, so she had her chin up and flied she was flying!. Suddenly her leaf ripped and she fell down on the tall grass she couldn’t see a thing until she saw a hopeless butterfly one of his wings were damaged. Looking at it she’s never seen anything like it a real butterfly with very big blue eyes and big fluttery wings. She fixed his wings with her web , the butterfly thanked her , the butterfly started to be friends with the spider they played. But one day they were turning old and they were turning blind, they made a baby of their own.
One day me and my friends where strolling around in “Ardgillan”, but then we saw, well I don’t know what it was, it looked like a hedgehog and a ball mixed together. But it was stuck on a stick and we couldn’t reach it!!! We were so curious we all stood on each others shoulder, my friend was able to grap it, but he has bad grip so you know where I’m going with this. Drop! Clatter! Smash! it broke apart. We were frozen in shock by what we saw, it was a a hedgehog with wings! We were knocked out for hours
One day , me and my parents went to China . When we got there , we were really hungry . We went to a restaurant . We tried lots of new food . One of them was a fruit called lychee . It was very sweet .I really liked it . While we were walking home I saw a tree .It was a lychee tree . Me and my dad went to the tree and picked some of the fruit . We brought it with us . The next day it was time to go home . When we got home I saw my sister and gave her some lychee she really liked it . I really joyed my holiday and I hope that we can go back again .
On a normal day at College my friend and I were searching through the trees outside school. We were doing this because our teacher said to find some cool stuff for the science fair at school. My friend Daniel and I were partners. When we made our way to the bushes we walked in and saw these rare looking eggs with spikes on them. How we know that they are rare is because Daniel was on Instagram and saw a picture of them on it. When Science Fair day came, Daniel and I brought the two spiky things up to the scientest he said they were rare butterfly eggs. He said when they hatch, they will turn orange and copper and they will look as beautiful as ever.
One day in Cork Ireland there was a poisonisesfruitthat can really kill you but you can make it into a medicene.AndIwas walking across the forest I found one of them but it’s strange because it’s supposed to be found in China.Later that day I picked it up it was shiny red pretty and precious.Afterwards I picked that one and went home and put it on the diamond blue table and opened it up.When it came to opening it it poked me a few times but then it got fine.And I opened it and there was nice white smooth fruit.
One lovely day, I was in my garden. I was trying to reach a horse chestnut. Finally I managed to grab one, suddenly when I opened it a rat was inside. “Ahhhhh” I screamed as the rat bit me. I searched up the rat on the internet, and it turns out that it is a poisonous. I could not believe my eyes. My mum had to take me to the hospital because I passed out. At this point I woke up feeling 100% better. Suddenly I started to forget how I even passed out.
Two years ago in 3rd class my teacher let us play outside because it was nature week. While playing I found a weird look spiky thing. It looked like an acorn but was the wrong colour. After school, me and my best friend were walking home I asked her did she know but she didn’t. So I went home and asked my mam but she didn’t even know. Suddenly my dad came home from work with a bag in his hand. “I have a surprise for you” he said. It was a tropical fruit just like the oneI had seen!
One day Mr Fox was in the countryside and seen a forest. He went in only to find two acorns sitting in a tree. “Get the acorns” said a magical whispering voice. Mr Fox looked all around and nothing was there. He looked at the acorns and prayed one would fall down. BANG! he heard further in the woods he looked and it was just a coconut. He still had no way of getting the acorns he shook the tree kicked the tree and even made an axe out of wood and it did not work. Finaly the acorns fell acorns fell down. Mr Fox was jumping in joy and ate the acorns.
We were on our holidays and as we were walking around a park we noticed that one part of it was full of all different types of trees. We did not know what they were so we asked someone. They told us that the trees were fruit trees and the local bakery planted them and every morning they would pick fruit of each tree to put in their cakes and pies. We decided to go to the bakery and see what they had. They had hundreds of cakes and they all looked tasty. I got a big chocolate one with pineapple and cream.
One summer’s day the children were walking to school. It was last day of school. The children were going to do gardening. Quickly they went outside . When they got to the garden the children each got a packet of seeds.Maya got a really weird looking seed.It said on it. Grows in one week. Quickly Maya openends the packet of seeds and plants the seeds. Maya got a watering can and poured water on the seeds.The next year Maya went back to the school garden and she saw her tree and there was a really weird seed on the tree.
One day, there was a little girl called Lucy. She went to see her granddad because he had Cancer. He was the oldest person in the town. He had stayed alive through the 1916 Easter Rising, World War I and World War II. He is super kind, nice and funny. He used to be a cook. Every night Lucy goes to her granddad ‘s house for dinner. They love cooking together. In his garden he had the oldest tree. It is 4765 years old. On the tree is a magic nuts. Her granddad makes his dish with the nut. He is the best cook.
Danny and Tom were on they’re holidays to Malaysia. One day they saw a tree with lots of acorns on it. Danny touched it and moved. Then a hedgehog came out of it. ‘Sorry if I woke you up’. Said Danny. ‘Hi’. Said the hedgehog. ‘Hello’ Said Danny. Danny had never seen a hedgehog on a tree before. So what are you doing on that tree.
Said Danny. No one really likes me. said the hedgehog. So the next morning Danny got lots of friends for the hedgehog. Danny and Tom were very very happy for the hedgehog they’re friend.
One mysterious day on a magical island a man got lost in the sea and came across an island. He saw the most magnificent tree that stood out from the rest. It had lots of differant types of fruits but one fruit caught his eye it was a yellow lychee. He went to get a closer look , He tried to grab the lychee from the tree but failed terribly instead the lychee fell on his head and he fell into a deep sleep.The man woke up a few hours later and saw the lychee had disappeared. He was very disappointed. He looked around him and noticed an angry lychee on a throne with a coconut army around him. The man was confused. He noticed a red button that said “take over the world” on it. The man saw the lychee going to press the button until a banana with a red cape who came from another magical tree in the island pushed him away. Banana man was so close to stopping the lychee but the lychee was too fast and pressed the button anyway. As soon as the lychee pressed the button.The man woke up it was a dream.
My animal is called Slato. He has an electrcic force-field around him. He lives in the Fire Desert. He smells like raw bacon and tastes, if you dared taste him, like cooked bacon. He is quite ugly but if he gets to know you he’s cute. If you try to attack him, you won’t know what happened to you!
He can walk on land and on water. He can breathe fire and he eats fire. He also eats leaves and drinks fire water. He mostly attacks the bushes to train in case of an attack on him.
There is a Waterhart who is eight years old. He lives in a pink lake. He looks like a million watermelon seeds joined altogether. He is totally black. He likes brocolli, pineapple and Nutella. He hates milk, cheese and sushi. He loves his teddy dinosaur. The teddy’s name is Choco. His favourite colour is green. He has a big swishy tail. He likes yellow flowers. Every day he goes swimming in the pink lake. Once he found a shell with eight pearls in it. He has a pet dog whose name is Susilelot. He has a best friend called Natalia.
One day Casper the bear fell down a hole. But it was not just any type of hole. It was a portal. He found himself at a lake that was pink.. He also found he had turned into a flying bear and could shoot out rainbows to fly on!
While he sipped the pink water of the lake he discovered that it was made of pink lemonade. He also saw a lioness who was running around the lake. Casper decided to shoot out a rainbow and he picked up the lioness. They had fun and flew about all day!
One day Magical Monchichi was in the Night Zoo. There was news of a baby in a basket on the river. Monchici knew he had to find the baby. He scaled the cage fence and jumped to the grass and searche alongside the river for the child. Suddenly there was a cry, he followed the noise to a small basket with a shining light coming out from it. Such a beautiful baby he knew he must take care of her. Her eyes sparkled in the night. Monchichi felt like he’d known her forever. He took her home and taught her to care for other little children as she got older.
Running to the pink lake is Unicore. Her tail wags faster and faster. All you can see is a big pink flash. Everyone would say she’s the fastest animal. All she can feel is the breeze gently touching her skin. She is as fast as lightning. When she’s coming past you can hear her neigh and when eveyone hears that they’re know she is coming. She’s as colourful as a rainbow. Her eyes are as blue as the sky, her tail and mane are as white as can be. When she goes past they boys act as manly as can be.
A boy called Will had a dog called Silas. But Silas was
mostly hated by other people. Silas is purple and grey
with no tail and one ear. But the secret is that Silas is
magical, he has the power to teleport and the power of imagination. One day Will and Silas were walking and Silas tripped and fell into acid pink lake.
‘No!’, screamed Will.
Will quickly grabbed Silas but did not get burnt. Will ran fast to the pet hospital. Will used his own imagination to try to heal Silas and he did. Will didn’t only get his pet back he got his best friend back.
Once me and my friend Max were in a desert to explore.We heard a story about two lionesses,and if they touch a human they will turn into a fire statue.They would have 24 hours to find the Master of the desert,and the Master would turn the fire statue back to them self. If they don’t make it in 24 hours they get crushed to small flames of fire! The Master is a fluffy white polar bear. One day the lioness and lions quit destroying people. When me and Max saw the lioness and lions we started to hide.”We have changed now,” said a lioness kindly. We became good friends.
On Friday because it was sunny me and my family went to the Night Zoo. I saw loads of animals. That were loads of colours. Suddenly my mam spotted a pink camel. I was shocked I never saw a pink camel. Although there was a pink lake so the camel can hide in the pink lake . After the Night Zoo was closing we went to a desert. When we came to the desert another pink camel was there. It smelled like poop. It looked like a unicorn, it felt like my teachers hair, I licked it and it tasted like an oreo! And it looked like my friend. ”We went home we saw enough animals for today” I said.
One time in Cork Ireland there was a wild magical animal that could do serious damage, like put a spell on you. Let’s just say it can kill you or make you really old and that’s what the spells can do.Oh and to mention the animal it’s a Magical jaguar or a cat that made its self big because of its spell.And then a random night zookeper came on and came there with Sam the spying giraffe and then another came and found the magical jaguar and then the jaguar put a spell on them that made them get trapped.And then they were never seen again but Sam the spying giraffe got to escape.
Once upon a time in the Nightzoo, it got a bit wierd,
‘Yay!’ shouted the animals.
“You will do a great job!”, happily said Heatwave to the new Nightzoo keeper. Heatwave is a dangerous animal in the nightzoo, but somtimes it can be friendly. Heatwave is made out fire, shaped like fire and fights like fire, he smells like black smoke. Heatwave got lost in the fire desert. When he got lost the Nightzoo keeper tried helping him, by trying to find his mum and dad and giving him powers.
The powers that he got were, he could freeze time and while time was frozen he could fly. He killed monsters with his really hot fire. To this day Heatwave and the Nightzoo keeper are still trying to find his parents.
There once was a magical lion that had wings,and had long teeth.He was really good at swimming and smelled like fish. He lived with four other lions in a cave beside a pink lake.He loved to eat plants and meat.He was the oldest of the pack so he was the leader. His wings were useful because he lived on a mountain and when the baby lions fell off it he spread his wings and flew down and saved them. He was the king, he was a great parent and most of all he was happy.
Introducing my magical animal. The animal comes from the pink lake . It is a pink tiger . It is pink so that it can hide in the pink lake. It is very soft. It is a young tiger. He can talk. He can’t fly. Her mam is a red tiger and her dad is a white tiger. She has a sister and no brother. Her mam works as a nurse in the animal hospital. Her dad works as a doctor in the animal hospital. She is younger than her sister. Her name is Bubble gum . And her favourite colour is pink.
Once upon a time in a desert far away,a unicorn put a magic spell upon all the animals making them all become friends. She was not around that often but when they needed her she was there. One day a group of humans decided to pitch up a tent right in the middle of the desert. They lit a fire and it spread. Which ment the animals were in danger.Two animals in particular were in big trouble, a lion and a camel. They had a circle of fire around them.They tried to get out but nothing worked. Luckily they could make a sound which would let the unicorn know they needed her. And before they knew it she was there not only saving there lives but saving the desert.
One day myself and Sarah were listening to our teacher telling us a story, The Lioness of The Fire Desert. I imagined that I teleported to this weird place, when I walked into this nice, beautiful place there was a wonderful pandacorn, it was baby pink with a rainbow horn, now this is my favourite animal. There was a Lake that was purple, I was in a dream come true. Altough it was a dream my friend Sarah was in it. I said to the pandacorn “hide”, we surprised Sarah. Suddenly I heard my teacher’s voice, “Stop day dreaming Jody”.