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t was Chrismas eve there was a man called Mild Pol.
He went to his friend’s party.
The first thing they did was have some fun with the Fortnite game.
His friend and my parents were playing cards and my dad won the match.
The second thing he did was to eat the first meal and then he opened the cracker.
It was not the time to open the presents but Mild Pol opened his present and BOOM! random things started to shoot out like a bright blue eye, ablue decoration and holly with red berries!!
Since that day he never opened a present.
It was Saturday. I was going to a Christmas party with my family. The party started at 7:30pm and ended at 10:30pm. I got my face painted and it was so cool. I was going to get a grinch face and then I changed my mind. I got a blue face with an eye a present,holly,lots of stars and a christmas bauble painted over one of my eyes. My little sister got her face painted aswell and she got the grinch. My little brother got the same as my sister and they both looked brilliant. We all had great fun,it was such an amazing day!
One day Amelia went to an art gallery. While she was there they were decorating the gallery with Christmas pictures. Amelia was interested in a particular picture, it had a blue eye looking through a Christmas tree, at an ornament and, a present. She asked if she could buy the picture. They said she could buy it, so she did. When Amelia got home she put the picture on the wall. Then she went up the stairs got her mam and showed her the picture. Her mam loved the picture, and asked where she had got the Christmas picture.
“Shall I enlighten you on Christianity?”asked Kylie as we walked on our pilgrimage to the Lourdes worshipping center.
“No thanks,” I replied, “I don’t know why we are coming here ‘cos I’m an aethiest.” I said .’s only
because mam has to pay homage to Jesus,” Kylie replied.
Then I tripped . “That was an embarrising faux pas!” she said ,straightening her magnificent gold dress, as she lived in splendour.
As we got there I saw a mural of an eye, a box and an ornament it was lovely.
Christmas was coming up. Amelia was really excited except her dog Coco passed away. It was a sad time since she had Coco since she could remember. But she tried not to let that ruin her Christmas holidays. Mum said she had a early Christmas present from her and Dad. I was so excited .Mum called me down stairs eventually,when I came down stairs there was a box.I opened it and it was the best thing ever it was a Golding Retriever puppy I was bursting with tears and excitement it was the best gift ever.
In Ireland there is said that this legend is not a legend. The legend is called Blue Man. On Christmas Eve there was this boy age 13 but very responsible and respectful to all. He lives in an alley way in Dublin nobody cares about him, but the boy thinks they don’t care about him because of his skin colour. The boy didn’t write a letter to Santa. But Santa thought he was so good, that he deserves a gift, when the boy opened the gift, all around him where decorations and a tree with ornaments, on it now he celebrated Christmas.
s was Christmas Day. Joe and his brother Philip were out having a snowball fight, Philip was chucking snowballs at Joe. Joe was losing then he hit his brother right in the face with a huge snowball. They decided to stop and build a snowman, they had a huge garden so this was easy. After 15 minutes they had finished building the snowman, it was the best snowman ever! They decided to go inside and raced each other up to the window Philip won and looked in the window he saw his uncle put his present under the Christmas tree.
I was putting up my Christmas tree yesterday when the room was filled with the most amazing light. My parents left the house to go shopping, so it was just me.
I found a present decoration on the tree and it was glowing so bright, that was where the light was coming from. I carefully took the ornament down, I had to grab my sun – glasses it was so bright. I peeked in then put it down on the ground and stared at it.
I heard my parents coming in I ran and told them what had happened, I lead them in to the sitting room and showed them the ornament but it disappeared it was gone.
From that day on I have been called ‘little miss liar.’
One sunny day my dad dragged us out to a hiking trip. My brother sister and I. I didn’t want to go hut he dragged us out anyway. “You need fresh air” he said this every sunny day. After a while we all arrived at the mountain range. We saw one family come down. But they were exhausted coming out of the car as if they already had done the hike. “Come on let’s go up the mountain “ dad said really enthusiastically. I groaned. I looked at the people come down the mountain they looked exhausted. We went up the mountain until up the mountain there was a eruption….
“Go Go Go!” said Jeff.
Ben was beathing heavily to the finish line but he would not give up.
His legs stared to give up but at the last centimeter he slowed down and someone zapped past him.
He came second place and said” Nnnooo!”
The person who won was named Greg.
The person who won was happy but exhausted.
“From now on you are my mortal enemy” said Ben.
Ben was going home when he saw Greg getting attacked and Ben said “ho no he is my enemy!”
The next thing Greg knews was that Ben saved him.
It was the day of the late late toy show. I was going to watch it with my family. We got treats for watching it. My Mam and Dad had to put the Christmas tree up and we got to decorate it together. My little brother and sister were supposed to watch it but they were exhausted and fell asleep.It was just as well we were recording it! I stayed up until it was over at 12:30. It was an amazing show I really enjoyed it. The next day I got to watch it all again with my little brother and sister.
One day Zoey went to Bronx Zoo. So she drove there, bought a ticket and went in. As she paid she fumbled with the ticket machine. She saw a circus tent. She sat and watched the show. There was a trapeze artist, she was amazing, Zoey had to stifle her gasps. There was a lion. During the interval Zoey watched as it took a large leap and then…It attacked!! Zoey watched as it pounced and bit the young girl sitting in front of her. Zoey grabbed the girl away and ran. Then there was a roar the lion was tranquelised. Zoey tried to leave but she was exhausted.
“”Shepherd 1.0 here, we’ve got our first target,” Dominic whispered into his walkie-talkie.
“Any company with him?” replied a voice.
“Yes general Leon. Three. The ones we stumbled into five days ago,” Dominic replied.
“WHAT??!!! We finished them of!! They were exhausted! “shouted a different voice.
“Calm down Daniel. Daniel quickly go to Dominik and….”
“Why can’t he come to me?”
”He doesn’t have any legs.”
OK then let’s kick him out” shouted Daniel angrily
“Daniel, you need to get to Dominik so we can kidnap those sheep, got it?”said Leon. “Fine. At least I’ll get some more sheep for my stable!”
Bang!Clash! As Abbey and Zakia were walking through the forest, they saw snakes, spiders, and tigers. They were scared of them and started to run. Abbey and Zakia were running for quite a bit. When they stopped running Abbey didn’t know where they where but they were exhausted and she did know that. Zakia found her way back home while Abbey followed her. They walked into the house with excitement and told their mam what had happened. Their mam told them what her day was like and that she would have loved to do what they did.
It was a Wednesday. My Mam was bringing my brother and I to the park. I would say we were there for an hour or two. I was so tired but we still had to go food shopping. I hate food shopping. Shortly after we finished shopping I fell asleep on the way home, that’s how tired I was. My Mam said to herself ‘how about we go to get ice-cream?’ But then she knew we were exhausted. After she had a brillant idea and asked ‘how about we get drive through?’ But my brother and I were fast asleep.
Balbriggan F.C. was battling against Real Madrid in the champions’ league final. The match started off very well for Balbriggan. The goalkeeper got so distracted that when the defender passed the ball to the keeper it rolled in. It was 1-0 to Real Madrid. The referee blew his whistle for half time. Balbriggan had an advantage because they seemed to be exhausted. The second half started. Cillian got taken down in the box. It was a penalty , Cillian shot and scored. With a minute left Cillian had the ball, he crossed it into the box. Emmanuel leaped up and headed it. Gooooooooaaaaaaal!
Milly and Lilly climbed a steep rocky Mountain. It was two thousand feet tall. Lilly fell into a puddle on the mountain, she was all soggy and wet. Milly fell over her and hurt her arm. They both got up and went on up the mountain. They stopped to look at the amazing view. They were excited about what would it be like at the summit. Suddenly a bird flew by, Milly shouted with excitement at it. It was a golden eagle. They continued to the top. Finally Milly and Lilly got up to the cloud covered summit. They were exhausted. So they started their descent.
It was 1920 in New York. Dan was working in his office. Ding! dong! the clock struck four he packed up and walked out. He got to the door and suddenly BANG! A gunshot fired. A man fell to the floor a man ran in a black coat and he had a pistol in his hand. Dan ran home and tried to find out who that was. He called his friends and they went through New York. They searched everywhere but couldn’t find anything but they didn’t look at the Rockefeller under construction. They climbed on a girder and went up. They were careful where they stood but then suddenly they saw the man. He grabbed his pistol and fired. They ran away suddenly they where exhausted. The man fired his gun at one of the girders ropes and…
One day Adam, John and Séan were invited to be on tv. The show was called Torture Maze, Anthony was the commentator.
”Three two one action! he said, good morning!”
Séan, Adam and John went through the maze. The game was simple – get to the middle without being killed by the henchmen. But they were exhausted from running to the show and were not able to run through the maze. The last one alive would win €1.00! The children really wanted the money badly. The child that won was Adam. He spent it on a bus ride to Dublin.
Today was Jacob’s birthday and he was having his party at a place called Astro Park.
Ding Dong! it was his friend Max at the door. Jakob welcomed him in and they played on his Xbox for twenty mins before his other friend Pablo arrived. They both had to go with him because their parents were doing something. They headed off to Astro Park . When they arrived and everyone else came they got into big bubbles and played football. Then they had food. It was his best birthday ever but they were exhausted.
Once there was two friends Jack and Joseph.They were arching with their bows in the forest. Joseph shot an arrow over the trees,so they went looking for it. They found it in a tree, the tree seemed to be the tallest in the forest. Jack tried to climb the tree but got nowhere they wanted to stay out but they were exhausted. The next day after school they went back to the forest,Jack brought a knife. He carved a target board in the fattest tree they had seen. Joseph hit two bullseyes,unfortunately Jack only hit one.
One day I was going to Bounce and Beyond, with my friends Aaron, Matthew and Sean. We were supposed to meet at 4:00 pm but we met at 4:00 am! We were about to go in but they were exhausted! A while after we just went in. It was great fun. Aaron started playing in the climbing area, I started in the bounce area and so did Sean and Matthew. Then we were leaving and there was a henchman at the door! So me, Aaron, Matthew and Sean just ran for our lives. And we got away, luckly.
Last week me and my family were in South Africa. As soon as we got to the hotel, I begged my mam and dad to go on a safari. They said we can go on Thursday evening. Thursday morning, I was buzzing to go on the safari. We got tickets at the door to go on the safari. Finally we got on the safari and looked at loads of animals. Suddenly we ran out of petrol we had to run but I was on my dad,s back. We got home and I said “lets play football”. but they were exhausted.
Come in ref that wasn’t a penalty?
I’m afraid it is.
Come on gk save this?!
1-0 already let’s go again!
Mark your man Callum.
Yep got him.
Chase chase chase good work!!
Pass to Adam on your left.
Omg it hit the post.
Run they are on the counter attack.
2-0 gk you have to do better.
Half time really ref 5 min early.
Let’s go straight from kick off.
No way I meant run not kick I guess you scored.
Come on let’s go again.Lets run come on YES another goal 2-2.
1 more but we are exhausted.
One bright morning I woke suddenly to a noise. I opened my eyes and there were two t…t…tigers at the end of my bed. I screamed and ran for my life out to my back garden, I hid in my playhouse. The tigers didn’t see me and strolled down my estate but they were exhausted and had cute little faces. I decided to go out to them and ask them if we could be friends. They gave me a great big cuddly hug and we are still friends today. No one believes they are my best friends.
One day me and my five friends Sean Matthew Ross Jimmy and Roy.We went to a football match and it was Manchester United vs West ham it is the 31 minute and United score with a lovely header by Emmanuel then it’s West ham on the ball and a lovely volley by Brian it’s is one all. Now its half time we all got a hotdog. Now it is the second half but they were looking existed but it started with a goal by Brian now West ham is wining but a quick come back happened a nice free kick by Ben it is 2:2 and Emmanuel is sprinting down the field and a lovely shot it a goaaaaaaaaallllllllllllll Manchester United win.
One cold night my brother and I went to bed at nine o clock, we fell asleep at nine o’clock.
I wock up and my brother and I were thrown out of bed . We seemed to be on the television. All of a sudden the floor collapsed down on top of green and stretchy slime.
There was a timer on the wall it had one hour on it. I saw a sign it said to find three keys within the time limit. I thought I saw one goled key under the sign my brother got sucked under the slime.
Ding! Ding! Ding! The alarm went off I panicked…
Oh my gosh my friends and I seem to be on the television, literally we’re tiny.
How did this happen? All I can remember is that we were at a crazy party and that a band was playing. It was the best night of my life. I think the band was called Burger Boys.
I think they were all family members and I think one of there names was Dylan, or something like that. Actually I can remember his name, his name was Jeff . He was wearing a gold shirt, raspberry trousers with a cerulean necklace and a silver ring.
“Hide from Mr TV,Steve” said Mango.
“Maybe we can hide in that foliage” said Steve.
“Oo! No there’s a thug in the foliage and he looks dishevelled” said Mango.
” Look there’s a shop” said Steve.
When they got into the shop they noticed that it was a tv store, but it was too late.
“I will trap you in a tv Ha! Ha! Ha!”said Mr TV, the villian.
” Ooo! chucks! We seem to be in the tv!”said Mango.
“It looks like the tv is reverberate“said Steve.
“It worked it worked!”said Mr TV.
“No no!”said Mango
It was Monday we were doing a Christmas play. Our parents were invited to come to the Christmas play. My mam was sick so she could not come. My mam was watching television and she was flicking through all the channels and on one of them she couldn’t believe it, we seemed to be on television doing our show! When the play was over we ordered dinner. After dinner we watched a movie. We had some drinks and sweets durning the movie. When the movie was over we went to bed. It was a great day. I love special times with my family.